Astonishing Adventures - Character Designs

These are some character designs I made using City of Heroes. These are the closest visual approximations I could make of my characters. Hope you like them.

Astonishing Adventures: Mini-Profiles 2

Well, I thought I'd post another one of these mini-profiles to get myself energized to work on AA some more. As usual, the pictures below are NOT the characters, but representations I've managed to find through copious amounts of internet scouring.

Colonel Britton

When the Nazi's began bombing London, the British military recruited their most accomplished soldier into their special operations program... a precursor to a superhuman military force. The officer was also given the codename: Colonel Britton and an appropriate costume to encourage troop morale.

Although he is, in many ways, an Anglicized version of Captain America, the name comes from a popular radio broadcaster in Britain at the time.

Dr. Nefarious

Doctor Nefarious is an amoral eugenicist and experimenter who secretly works for the US government. His villainous identity was created as a smoke screen when the government began enlisting the Mechanist to clean up his mistakes. He is a strict Darwinist who believes that science is an extension of the natural process. Everything he does it justified by the natural order of things.

The Fairy Queen

My most recent creation. She possesses the ability to summon brightly colored fairies that do her bidding as well as reflect her mood. They may be real or they may be figments of her imagination, but either way, they can swarm an enemy like giant wasps.

G-Man

In a way, G-Man is ahead of his time because his name is completely ironic. He is J. Edgar Hoover's number one agent and he has been assigned to oversee the mystery man phenomenon. His real name is Dex Corrigan, but he took the name G-Man as a dig at the ridiculous names that the others take. He lacks the true adventurous spirit of a mystery men and will undermine their work if Hoover gives the order.

Lilith

Lilith is the assistant to Dietrich von Frankenstein, descendant of the original Victor von Frankenstein. She is hauntingly beautiful and brings a chill whenever she enters a room. One cannot help but feel close to death when she is around. If she has any special abilities, she does not show it. Most people think she is the creation of Dietrich, but the opposite is closer to the truth.

Miss Mercury

Another recent creation, Miss Mercury is a teenage super-heroine with some minor power or trinket that enables her to play with the big boys. As a junior member of the Allied Hero Brigade, she is kept from the worst of the action and assigned to one of the others at all times. She often travels to the states to promote war bonds, working women, rationing, and is involved with projects to reduce juvenile delinquency.

Pendragon

Hidden behind a full face mask marked with the royal lion crest (not seen because this isn't really him, natch), few people know who he really is, but like his name suggests, he is the returned Arthur Pendragon who was awakened in Avalon after England was threatened by the Nazi forces. His dialect is extremely old fashioned and he often does not understand "modern" ideas, but he is every bit the warrior you would imagine... with or without Excalibur.

Spitfire

This blonde tomboy is possibly the most talented officer in the RAF. She was there when the Nazis first attacked. Most of her friends are dead, but she is still shooting down Gerries over London. When the Allied Hero Brigade is formed, she is assigned as their senior pilot. Her name comes both from her personality and her plane.

The Templar

An old world aristocrat from Eastern Europe, the Templar is, as his name suggests, one of the Knights Templar who gained immortality from drinking from the Holy Grail... however not all of his mystic endeavors has been as successful. He is a practiced magician whose face was horribly scarred and hidden behind an iron mask.

Tigress

One of my favorite creations, Tigress is a high society socialite and daughter of a big game hunter. After her philandering husband donates a female tiger to a local zoo (supposedly in her honor), she starts to obsess over it. One day, it breaks out of the zoo and attacks her, but her husband shoots it. This is the moment of her breakdown. She sees herself in the noble, captured animal. She kills her husband and becomes a jewel thief.

Titan

One of the first to join the official US supersoldier program, Titan uses a special growth formula to exponentially increase his mass. Unfortunately, the drug is highly addictive and unstable. He is a good man who is a bit naive and completely unprepared for the demon he invited into his body.

Vesper

The daughter of a four-star general, Mary Jane was accidentally exposed to a chemical which made her invisible. Using this new power and the fighting abilities she learned from being in a military family, she took the identity of Vesper to fight criminals and spies. In her day job, she is a rising, young New York model. After joining the Allied Hero Brigade, she and the Enigma fall deeply in love.

There are more characters yet to be revealed, but for them, I don't have any pictures that are even halfway decent.

UPDATE: I have one more to add to this list.

Clara

The Mechanist created a Mechanical assistant by using his experimental "electronic brain." Unlike a computer, this system functions via complex electrical impulses that build their own pathways. As a result, their mental faculties are somewhat limited and they can exhibit seemingly random behavior. Whether this is a glitch or an evolutionary property is up to debate.

Astonishing Adventures Profiles: Rosie the Riveter

Welcome back to Astonishing Adventures. I realize I haven't posted on this in... half a year, but nothing has been more on my mind. I will be posting a general update soon, but in the meantime, I thought I would feature my most well-developed female character (not developed like that)...

Rosie the Riveter!

(As usual, the images are an approximation of the character based on available imagery.)

Rosie is an amalgam of characters I've written in the past and, despite her name, is in no way based on my sister, Rose. Rather, she is the personification of the fictional propaganda image that called women into the workplace to replace the men who were off at war. To that end, she also represents the conflict between domesticity and independence.

As we have seen in numerous movies, the independence that women gained from contributing to the work force was taken away upon the end of the war and women were "encouraged" to go back to their home... the way God intended. This led directly to the women's lib movement of the sixties and seventies.

Rosie represents the unconventional woman. She is a first generation Mexican immigrant who came across the border as a child and set up a repair shop with her father. Since he took ill, she has been running it by herself. (Maybe I should give it some deliberately misleading name like "Rios & Sons Auto Shop.")

She first gets into the mystery man career when she discovers the Enigma bleeding in an alley. She patches up his wounds and ever since has been serving as his girl friday. She absolutely adores Charlie (The Enigma) and considers him her mentor. His bravery, wit, style, and intelligence are all things that she admires and wants to embody herself.

Gradually, she works her way into the role of sidekick and begins to backup Charlie on his missions while dressed in a cute chauffeur's outfit with a domino mask. But when Charlie joins the Allied Hero Brigade, a team of mystery men from the Allied nations, the Mechanist invites Rosie along as well.

It is here that Rosie comes into her own and adopts "the Riveter" to her new identity. Also, studying under the Mechanist significantly developed her natural mechanical abilities, so she is developing unique personal skills that will get her out from under the Enigma's shadow... whether she likes it there or not.

One defining aspect about her character is that she is a lesbian. Now, I create a lot of lesbian characters and every time I do, I have to ask myself if this is literary masturbation or if I have a good reason. Do I need a good reason to have a gay character any more than I do a straight one? Why don't I have more gay male characters if it isn't about titillation?

All good questions. (Thank you.) I write more lesbian characters because I identify with them. I've always gotten along really well with lesbians. Strangely well. I may have been a lesbian in a previous life. Contrarily, while I have nothing against gay men in general, I don't seem to get along well with them. I've gotten into arguments with them about the differences between homophobic slang and genuine homophobia. I was even once bullied by a gay guy. We just don't seem to get along well on a personal level. Of course, that could just be my limited experience. Consequently, I feel like I write lesbians well and gay guys not so much. Not that I don't want to try. Once I get to the fifties, I feel like I'm obligated to comment on male homosexuality within the beat culture.

Also, homosexual behavior always rises in single sex environments which is what was happening state side while the men were away. By making Rosie a lesbian, it provides her with a degree of independence from men that (I think) is enhanced by the fact that two great men are her mentors. She isn't a "man-hating dyke," a butch, or even a lipstick lesbian. She is a woman who isn't in conflict with her sex or her own inner strength, but she is also very young with a lot of growing up to do. That's the kind of character I want to write.

Ultimately, Astonishing Adventures is a story about power and responsibility. The men have it and fight over it, but the women are just starting to get it and no one knows what they are going to do with it.

Astonishing Adventures: Name Change Update

Just a quick update on recent name changes to avoid confusion. I'll go back and change my old posts later.

First, Astounding Adventures has become Astonishing Adventures. I still don't love the name, but "astonishing" is a little easier on the tongue. I originally avoided the word "astonishing" for its connection to the recent Joss Whedon series Astonishing X-Men, but I'm sure that will become old news by the time I'm ready to publish.

Also, for the sake of flow, I've changed the Mechanic to the Mechanist. And in case you missed it, I've changed the Alchemist to Dr. Alchemy. (There actually is a Dr. Alchemy in comics, but he is a third rate DC villain with absolutely no resemblance to my character, so hopefully I won't have to change it for legal reasons.)

Astonishing Adventures: Mini-Profiles

I decided to do some mini-profiles for some of the supporting characters in my story. As usual, any artwork is not mine or of my character. Since I don't have the ability to draw, I scour the internet looking for pictures of people or characters who resemble them. This helps the character seem more real, not only for you, but for me too.

All set? Here we go.

Dietrich von Frankenstein

He is the great grandson of the legendary Victor von Frankenstein who has co-opted the cultural cache of his ancestor to build himself a bit of celebrity. He is the original goth; a poser of the worst kind. Although he has learned a lot of occult tricks, most of his mastery of monsters and witchcraft was stolen from others. He is the first to boast over a captured enemy, and the first out the door when that enemy escapes.

Dr. Josef Mueller

A mild-mannered, idealistic German scientist who raised a eugenics experiment as his own daughter while he taught the young Mechanic. At his daughter's insistence, he joined the Nazi Party in their search for Atlantis and was exposed to the Atlantian's telepathic library. The experience changed him and turned him into a man who will stop at nothing short of transforming the world into his own twisted utopia.

Die Gestapo Geist

An elite German soldier who, after the death of his family, volunteered for an experiment that gave him the ability to turn intangible. It also changed his molecular structure so that the color of his body is not reflected leaving him looking like a real life black-and-white photograph. Generally, he's just referred to in the story as Geist. I've had this character in my head for a long time and I really love the character. His emotionless and colorless nature reflect a simplicity that underlies his motivation. Like a good soldier, he does what he's told, but Geist's service has extended past death... past ideology or ambition. He is simply a force of cold, murderous will. Still, I see him as somewhat sympathetic due to his ability to see past the foolishness and hubris of the living and to the bitter nihilistic reality of death.

The Hidden Khan

While on the surface there isn't much to distinguish this character from the average Asian megalomaniacal stereotype, to me he represents the end of imperialism and the decadence that comes with it. While his arch-nemesis, Dr. Alchemy, is trying to redeem his soul before death, the Khan is desperately trying to escape death, not only to preserve his existence but his way of life. Yet for the world to move forward, his way of life has to die. This makes him something of an endangered species.

The Illusionist

If a villain loses all of the time, how can he be a serious threat? What if he arranges things so that even when he loses, he still wins? That was the idea behind the Illusionist. He has grown so bored with mundane society that he creates huge games to amuse himself. His latest game is supposed to make the Enigma just like him. The Illusionist would mentor him again, if the Enigma would allow that, but instead he is going to force the Enigma to see the world as he does by baiting him into conflicts.

Milla Mueller

Milla was the first generation of an early eugenics and special breeding program. The Mechanic met and fell in love with her as a child while she was contained in a special chamber designed to control her environment with additional air pressure and controlled contaminants designed to increase her strength, speed, stamina, and resistance to disease. As she grew up, she became a leading member of the Nazi party believing that she is following the destiny of her blood. She is one of the few people the Mechanic has met who is a challenge for him both physically and mentally. The Mechanic shot her eye out for threatening Padre's life, now she both wants to kill him and marry him.

Lizard King

The lizard king was once a normal person until Dietrich subjected him to modified alligator hormones. Now as the Lizard King, he has become bitter and angry. He has allowed his monstrous appearance to define him and sought the physical pleasures which are all he has left. Since only the Nazis have offered him that, he has made some very powerful allies.

Padre

This is the Mechanic's best friend... which shows you how socially inept he is at heart. Padre got his name from a white stripe on his neck that vaguely resembles a priest's collar. He is extremely well read, spending almost all of his time in the library. His other favorite hobby is flying. He is the helmsman on the Mechanic's airship and frequent pilot.

Rosie Rocket (AKA Rosario Rios AKA Rosie the Riveter)

Rosie is one of the few sidekicks I have in this story. Possibly the only one. My rough plan is to have her start out as the Enigma's best friend, confidant, and Girl Friday, and then to gradually allow her to become a protege to the Mechanic and take an active role in the war. For me, Rosie represents demands of a female show of strength that was important during the war and inappropriate after the war. The fact that she is (to borrow Kevin Smith's phrase) "a male affectionate lesbian" not only gives her a "one of the guys" quality on the team, but also means she doesn't need a man to complete her... which I imagine a lot of American women were learning at the time. Still, she has her own issues with love which should come into play at some point.

The Silk Spider

A late addition to the war, the Silk Spider is a spy and assassin who is only a rumor in the highest offices of defense. She seems to have superhuman abilities of seduction and manipulation, but nothing so overt as to define it as a power. On the surface, she has a flapper's laisez faire, hedonistic demeanor, but what's going on behind that is anyone's guess.

Tin Man

A Nazi war machine invented by Dr. Mueller, discovered and befriended by two orphans and their young dog in the middle of dust bowl America. This is one of my simplist and most fun ideas for this project. It's like a "boy and his dog" story, but instead it's a boy, a girl, a dog, and their Nazi war machine. The Mechanic meets it at some point and invites Tin Man and the kids to join him in their secret headquarters figuring that nowhere in the world is particularly safe right now.

Tokyo Rose

Tokyo Rose is a young female samurai in the direct service of Emperor Hirohito, but conflicted by her Zen and Confusian principles. She rides an A6M Zero like it was a horse and keeps at her katana and Type 26 hammerless revolver on her at all times. She is a highly skilled warrior, incredible disciplined and serious as death. Unlike a traditional samurai, she wears fairly light armor, preferring mobility and speed over protection. I'm not sure what I'll do with this character, but then, it's best not to have everything planned.

Twilight & Dawn

There is a comic book cliché of people (almost always men) who are perfect in every way mastering everything that is cool to master from boxing and swordfighting to detective work and science. There was often a certain arrogant charm that came from that kind of hubris, like they are genuinely disappointed with everyone and everything for being so flawed. I decided to mix that stock character with Douglas Fairbanks, Jr. and the Thin Man series and twist it into an eccentric Hollywood couple of the most glamorous sort with a penchant for adventure. I used this picture of Fairbanks and Ginger Rogers to say, "Anything Twilight can do, Dawn can do backwards and in high heels."

Übermensch

This character is pretty much a blend of Marvel's Thor, DC's Superman, and Nazi ideology. I always thought it was unfair to criticize other countries by making their heroes into monsters. Don't get me wrong, Übermensch is as much a monster as Hitler, but I want my readers to see him as someone who can proudly embody the Nazi ideal. I want them to imagine the hope, faith, and love that the German people must have placed in their leaders, because that is one of the worst evils. Übermensch was created in a Thule Society ritual designed to summon the Norse god Thor, but the rules of magic manifest him in the form of the creator. He is, therefore, a modern Nazi ideological distortion of the original character. He truly believes in the Nazi ideal, but that's easy when it says that you are the most perfect being on Earth. As of yet, he is far more powerful than any one of the Allies... perhaps more powerful than all of them combined.

Well, that's it for now. Comments, questions, and criticisms are always appreciated.

Astonishing Adventures Profiles: Dr. Alchemy

Sometimes I forget that the primary purpose of this blog is not to show off what I'm working on, but as a place where I am forced to explain my concepts to other people in order to make the concept more stronger... particularly with feedback. Consequently, when I am struggling with a character, I'm hesitant to write about it for fear that people just won't get why I like it. The truth, more often than not, is that I'm not sure what I like about it. But when you have had a character in your mind long enough, you know that there is something worth keeping. Something you can work with.

This brings me to Dr. Alchemy (AKA The Alchemist AKA Smoke AKA whatever name I decide to give him next).

Dr. Alchemy (as I have now taken to calling him) is the dark side of superheroes. His motivation doesn't come from a hope that we can better ourselves like the Mechanic's. It comes from witnessing the evil of the world.

The archetype of the "dark knight" is a classic adventure adaptation of the anti-hero. He is often rich, sophisticated, and obsessive. This character type can be seen, most notably, in Zorro, the Shadow, and Batman. Both the Shadow and Batman (amongst numerous others) follow a tradition in comics that... well, urks me. That is, the white guy who goes to China, studies under some master or another, and becomes one of the best martial artists in the world. Consequently, the comic book universe ends up with a lot of white martial arts masters and very few Asian ones.

For that reason, my protagonist is Chinese, although a westernized aristocrat to some extent. I imagine him being very proper and uptight, wearing old fashioned, Victorian clothing as he sips tea with perfect posture and a penetrating stare that meticulously catalogs the flaws in every person he sees. He is terse, blunt, and uncompromising. He doesn't try to make friends because he doesn't trust many people, but he will make allies if it suits his purposes.

Despite his aristocratic demeanor, Wu-Chen Li (AKA Dr. Alchemy) was raised an orphan on the streets of Hong Kong and made a living by joining one of the tongs (Chinese mafia). His work brought him to the attention of the Hidden Triad, a network of spies and assassins descended from the personal intelligence operatives of an ancient and paranoid Chinese emperor.

Li was trained in their secret techniques including multiple forms of combat and espionage. He was trained to handle a variety of weapons from the latest guns to the most ancient swords, spears, and bows. He was also trained in both Western and Eastern medicine (after all, the best killer is an expert on anatomy). He has learned how to blend in with all walks of life from German aristocrats to Cuban cabañas, but he found a certain comfort in blending Victorian sensibilities with some native Chinese influences (although he wouldn't adopt this as his style until much later).

He soon became one of the top assassins and member of an elite fraternity with each member poised to take control at the death of the Hidden Khan. The Khan is an amalgamation of Fu Manchu, the Mandarin, Kaizen Gamorra (left), and every other meglomaniacal, long-fingernailed, long-mustachioed Asian villain stereotype. He is roughly one hundred fifty to two hundred years old, kept alive through ancient alchemical practices, but although he is still quite powerful, he is extremely close to death. He has long been in pursuit of the fabled "Divine Elixir" which is supposed to grant immortality.

One day, the Khan sent Li to an ancient temple hidden in the Himalayas which was rumored to hold the secret of the Divine Elixir. After killing the Buddhist priest, Li was shown to the elixir. Unable to help himself, he drank it for himself, but it was not the gift of immortality. Li felt a burning in his blood as his third eye was forced open. He saw himself burning at the 18th level of Naraka for killing an Arhat, an enlightened being.

Li descended into a great fever for weeks and was tended to by the peaceful monks whom he assaulted, yet it isn't until one of his fellow assassins arrives to find out what happened to him that Li makes his choice to defend these people against the Khan. After a furious battle, Li delivers the body of the assassin to the Triad with a warning that he will do everything in his power to stop them.

Originally, I wanted him to resemble the Shadow with his broad-rimmed hat, scarf pulled up to his nose, and big bulky jacket, but now I'm thinking more of a cowl that covers up all or most of his head. Instead, I've been looking to the Sandman (left), Dr. Mid-Nite (right), and the recent Spider-Man: Noir (top) for inspiration. Li takes his work very seriously, so his clothing and weapons tightly conform to his body without restricting movement.

Part of the charm of this character is that I easily find ways to incorporate ninjas, Nazis, and demons all into the same story. The character blends martial arts with gritty, street-level crimefighting and some minor mysticism (think excorism and charms of protection, not Gandalf and Harry Potter). Add to that, fairly steampunk-ish body armor, two long silver pistols, and an assortment of realistic period utilities including smoke bombs, grappel lines, acids, explosives, and anything else he might have a need for. One idea I had was that he uses a powerful inhalant to put himself into a death-like trance that grants him powerful strength and speed while making him mentally focused... sometimes with frightening results. I'm not certain if I will retain that idea.

One thing I am sure of is Dr. Alchemy's car: a 1938 Phantom Corsair. The moment I saw this car, I knew I had to work it into the story. This was a prototype design that never made it into mass production. It's a six-passenger coupe capable of speeds of up to 115 MPH... but maybe Rosie or the Mechanic can upgrade it with a nitro boost, oil slick, smoke screen, tire spikes... the usual stuff.

Also, Dr. Alchemy was going to be a San Francisco based superhero. Besides being a visually compelling place, this would enable me to structure stories around the Chinese immigrant community... however, I found out, much to my disappointment, that the height of the tong wars in San Francisco took place in the 1920s and 30s. Also, white police were actually instrumental in negotiating that peace by showing respect to the Chinese community. It didn't exactly support my cynical nature. I also wanted a featured hero at America's biggest cities to respond to historical events, but maybe I need to start letting go of a lot of big ideas and respond to the demands of the character... rather than making the characters respond to the demands of my ego.

Creating a character: Part 3

C) Cathexis

So now I have three ideas. It is important not to confuse ideas with characters. My ideas might tickle me in naughty places, but if I think of them as characters, I will soon realize that they have no depth, personality, or dimension and start to hate them.

Obsession is a writer's greatest friend and worst enemy. It compels you to dig into every detail of your world, but you often lose sight of the big picture. For this reason, I've found that it is useful to draw on a wide variety of influences to help shape your story. Ideally, these influences will range from being extremely similar to being extremely different, therefore creating something recognizable, but still feeling original.

Bitch-Monster Seductress

The first thing that strikes me about both Fantomah and the Black Widow is their resemblance to period actress Veronica Lake. Now there is a woman who not only looks like she could consume a man's soul, but most men might just let her.

I've found hair to be very important to distinguishing characters. Hair color immediately leaves an impression on the reader about what kind of person this is (of course, there are more options available to us anglo-saxon folk). Dark hair connotes a certain seriousness and stability, which is why Superman, Batman, and Wonder Woman all have jet black hair. Brown hair connotes an average, boy (or girl)-next-door quality, and a bit of blue collar identifiability (i.e. Spider-Man, Han Solo, Cyclops, or Kitty Pryde). Redheads suggest fire and passion (i.e. Jean Grey, Mary Jane, or Guy Gardner). Blondes suggest a certain... divinity (i.e. Captain America, Luke Skywalker) that is actually consistant with the Nazi ideal. Often, blonde hair is a mark of purity of spirit, but it can also suggest a false purity; a purity for "evil" or a corruption of an ideal.

I see this character as having very pale, sickly blonde hair... jaundiced, even. She is the embodiment of the romantic passion of death. This should play well against the Enigma who is a life-affirming being who flirts with self-destruction.

To ascribe yet another archetype to her, she is a vamp; deadly as arsenic and sweet as chocolate. I would consider making her a literal vampire, but it doesn't really interest me. Even though this story is designed to embrace all types of popular fantasy, vampires have been so overdone. If I bring them into the story, I want to try to refresh the mythos and this wouldn't help reinforce the dominant themes of my story.

But it might be fun to tease her vampiric qualities. She might be particularly sexy as an Eastern European woman. Possibly even a Jewess (Am I enjoying using common period racism a little too much? Probably.) whose hair was dyed or shocked from stress. I kind of wanted to have a character who represents European Jews and Old Testament wrath. She might just be the character.

Where the Black Widow received her powers from Satan, my character can receive her powers from God... but not a (supposedly) loving Christian God. This reminds me of the Specter, a superhero embodiment of God's wrath. The problem with that character is that he was basically all powerful. I want someone who has to get a little more... creative with her vengeance. In fact, she doesn't even have to be God's wrath, she can just think she is... or she can be and not know she is. So many options...

Since she would play well off of the Enigma and is an Eastern European woman, maybe I'll tie her in with my gothic mad scientist, Dietrich von Frankenstein. Essentially, Dietrich is the eurotrash descendent of Victor von Frankenstein who not only stole his formula for the re-animation of life, but also many other secrets of the occult. He travels to Los Angeles to consult on a new film (which will be a legally-distinct homage to the classic Universal monster movies) and ends up inflicting monsters upon the city and our hero in particular. Perhaps this character could be his assistant and creation who turns on her creator.

For now, I will call her Lilith in reference to the Biblical woman predating Eve, often associated with demonic qualities.

Biker Chick

When going through the list of Golden Age superheroines, two of them really stood out to me: the Phantom Lady and the Black Cat. Maybe it is because, unlike so many comic women of the time, these two were actually pretty damn sexy. (As a sidenote, the word "phantom" seems popular when describing women; Phantom Lady, Fantomah, Blonde Phantom... I may want to exploit that.)

The cover here is by Matt Baker who is, incidentally, the first known African American comic book artist. I find this cover particularly astounding because it is one of the few comics I've seen from the period that gives real weight and shape to the character. Of course, it doesn't hurt that she looks like a Bettie Page fantasy (although this cover is from two years before Page started modeling). Since the character is a model, maybe I can draw from Bettie Page to develop her character.

I'll take a moment here to wonder if the idea for a crimefighting, bike-riding model who can turn invisible and participates in bondage photography is more of an adolescent fantasy than a character. Perhaps, but the origins of all comic book characters are contained in adolescent fantasy. The trick is to give life and motion to that adolescent fantasy.

Now, unlike Lilith, I have a superpower chosen for this character; that is, the ability to turn invisible. There are many ideas for how one might turn invisible. Like the Fantastic Four's Sue Storm, one can bend light, although this always sounded far to complicated for me. Or the Shadow could "cloud men's mind" to become invisible. It was also a method used in The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy with the "Somebody Else's Problem field" and in The Belgariad as well. I always liked this idea that you could see something, but just not notice it. Of course, that might not be as interesting visually when I could have her fade gradually or one part at a time.

To look at all my option, I search for "invisibility" on Wikipedia (I use wikipedia a lot) and investigate my various options. Naturally, I look to "invisibility in fiction" first. I will delve into the scientific side later.

One thing that stands out here is a 1942 film called "Invisible Agent" where the grandson of Jack Griffin, the original Invisible Man, lives in the US and uses his grandfather's formula to become a Nazi agent. It's just contrived enough to work. Rather than develop my own half-assed explanation for invisibility, I can borrow someone elses. Besides, the works of HG Wells are public domain, so they could help flesh out this world.

I almost forgot that Jack Griffin goes insane from using his drug. I can retain this element if I want to, or I can say that flaw was eliminated over the years. Maybe it can even be controlled through will... or maybe our heroine was the unwitting subject of experimentation and produces the chemical from an artificial gland. Not only is that creepy, but it explains why she would have some degree of control over her powers.

Ah, now someone points out that perfect invisibility would likely blind an invisible person because no light would be absorbed by the retina. It would be interesting if the one flaw to her power is that her pupils were visible. A clever person would notice such a thing... and lord knows, my story has a lot of clever people.

As a side note, I really like the Black Cat's costume. It is simple, but elegant. Women in comics today don't cover up their butt-cheeks. I wouldn't call myself a prude, but I really don't understand why we expect mature women who fight crime to dress like strippers.

I think there are far too few representations of strong women in the media, so ones that I find strong stand out. In addition to a good script, a strong female role also requires a good actress. One show I've been watching lately is Weeds starring Mary-Louise Parker who I find incredibly attractive, not only physically, but verbally. She has a beautiful voice, excellent timing, and ample wit. These are qualities I would like to appropriate for this character.

One thing I like about her character in Weeds is her ability to adapt to different social situations. She can go from snobbish, gossipy middle-aged housewives to gang meetings and hold her own in either arena. It's an admirable quality and something I would like to have in this character.

For now, I'll call this character Mary Jane as an homage to both the actress and the show.

Having linked the character to this role, I find myself thinking about the stuck-up warrior princess that I was supposed to work on next and thinking maybe I should blend that quality into this character. Sure, she is slumming it and full of herself, but that just means she will have to be humbled.

Now I find myself in an appealing dichotomy whereby I both want to illustrate her inner strength and humble her. I've found, through study and experience, that irony is a writer's best friend. It is that entertaining balance between extremes that engages the reader. I should also be able to lead the reader's expectations of her simply by showing her in different contexts. By showing her as an heiress and a model, I can make people dislike her, then slowly start to build their respect.

I even have a crime-fighting name for her: Vesper. It suggests intangible, ghost-like qualities, feels era-appropriate, and is sexy. Now I just need to decide... black hair (like Bettie, Phantom Lady, and Mary-Louise) or auburn hair (like Black Cat)? I'm leading toward auburn.

D) Conclusion

So I didn't end up with three characters as planned, but I think I came up with two pretty good ones. Giving me a total of five important and unique female characters in my story. I think Lilith and Vesper will make a fine addition indeed.

Creating a character: Part 2

A) Research

One of the first things I did was research on wikipedia for a history of women in comics. The first superheroine was actually Fletcher Hank's Fantomah an ancient, ageless blonde Egyptian woman who turned into a skull-faced being with the power to fight evil.

Interesting, but I don't quite know what to do with it.

Next is "the Invisible Scarlet O'Neil." That one is pretty much self-explanatory. She is a plain-clothed, plain-named superhero with invisible powers. Not too exciting, but invisibility is one of those cool, simple powers that seventy years of comic books have made boring. I would like to try to reconnect people with the fantasy of being able to turn invisible.

Let's see, then there is the Black Widow. She was (apparently) commissioned by Satan to send evil-doers to Hell. I'm sensing a "woman as monster" theme already; the bitch expressed as metaphor. That's something I can work with and take in interesting directions. (Note: It may be a sexist idea in its origination, but that doesn't mean it has to be in my story... although it could.)

What else? Ah, Nelvana of the Northern Lights. Now this is adorable. She's a patriotic Canadian superhero who is half Inuit goddess. Those Canadians are so sensitive to others it makes me sick. Why can't they have good racial characters like Pieface Tom, Ebony White, Black Lightning, Black Vulcan, Black Panther, Black Fury, or Black Negro? In all seriousness, though, this character is pretty cool. Her name is dumb, but the idea has promise. In fact, since both she and Lady Liberty are goddesses (of a sort), I should probably revisit this.

Then came Wonder Woman. Now, I won't go into a big diatribe about the complexity of this character because I've already done that on another blog and it really warrants its own post. Suffice it to say, Wonder Woman is an American patriot and a sapphic Greek with a prediliction for bondage and lesbianism. Conventional comic book writing would have us remove all the dirty parts to keep her more marketable, but really they make the character so much more interesting. To ignore this character and, even more, the controversy around it would be unpardonable, in my mind.

What else? Well, we have the jungle girls which feature all of the fun of Tarzan with the joy of leopard print bikinis. Of the more traditional superhero sort, we have the Blonde Phantom, a girl Friday-type who moonlights as a superhero; Golden Girl, a patriotic sidekick; Miss America, an heiress who fights crime out of boredom (This is a common character-type who, like Princess Leia, follows the archetype of the princess hero. This is a fantasy were the reader can imagine the luxury of being rich and secure, yet the thrill of adventure. It is similar to the billionaire superhero, but distinctly different in that the woman is not in possession of her wealth. More often than not, her wealth is in possession of her.); Namora, amphibian queen of Atlantis (Atlantis features prominently in period comics and also in my story); Sun Girl, fire-wielding secretary to the Human Torch (meh); Phantom Lady, daughter of a senator who turns invisible; Black Canary, a motorcycle riding street fighter; Miss Fury, a wealthy socialite in a catsuit; and the Black Cat, actress and stunt woman who is also a motorcycle rider.

B) Archetypes

From this research, I've been able to come up with four primary trends.

Invisibility - Despite the fact that you haven't heard of them, the Invisible Scarlet O'Neil and the Phantom Lady were both extremely popular. Their power brings to mind the Fantastic Four's Invisible Girl (later, Invisible Woman), Sue Storm. Logically, I know this power was probably chosen for its passive nature, but it can serve as a metaphor for the "invisibility" of women in society as well as highlighting the voyeuristic pleasure of observing women. Perhaps I'll have an invisible character who is a model or an actress, someone who is used to being looked at.

Warrior Princess - As indicated above, there seems to be a natural fantasy of a woman escaping domestic comfort to fight crime. Call me cynical, but I'm reminded of the song Common People about a rich girl who wants to slum it, but as the song says, "you could call your dad; he could stop it all." It's all very obnoxious to me, but an understandable primal desire of, essentially, having perfect comfort and adventure. Unfortunately, the two are mutually exclusive, or at least, that's what I believe.

Bitch-monster - There is a fear amongst men that behind every beautiful woman is a monster who will destroy him. Sometimes I think we are just looking for the monster whose destruction will be most fun. Still, the archetype indicates that she isn't a villain, so what would compel a woman to go around destroying men? I have the rough outline in my head already. Young girl, desperately in love, experiences a tragedy that destroys her life and gives her terrible powers in the process. Damaged beyond repair, she spends her life seducing the worst men and destroy them utterly. I have the framework, I just need to fill in the details.

Biker Chick - There is something undeniably appealling about a tough chick on a bike. There is also something that compells me to use the world "chick." It certainly fits the Black Canary. Is the motorcycle the modern evolution of the horse and, therefore, carry over some of the romantic implications? Does the motorcycle convey a sense of individuality and rebellion? Perhaps that too.

So now I have a tragic bitch-monster seductress, a clever model who can turn invisible, and stuck-up adventurer wannabe. So far so good.

Next, cathexis or how to start adding dimension to an otherwise two dimensional character.